Tuesday, April 27, 2010

Line graph comparison 1

The graph shows the changes in the number of immigration in to the UK by people from West Indies, India and Pakistan by date of entry to the UK from 1940 to 1980.

The biggest change was in 1960 that it was about five thousand then it peaked at thirty five thousand. After that it dropped to five thousand in 1970, From the year 1940 to 1960 it remained stabiles most of the time with few changes that Between 1960-1970 there was not stabilization, it fluctuated very much with a big difference between West Indies, India and Pakistani immigration.
In conclusion, the number of people from India and Pakistan are bigger than the number of people from West Indies that immigration to the UK in period from 1940-1980.

2 comments:

  1. Moh'd Ahmed:

    Good start, now fix the errors and rewite/ repost your essay.

    The Fox

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  2. Moh'd Ahmed:

    Good writing! You still need a total of 2 argument and 2 line graph essays (not including 'Milk' and 'Animal Testing').

    Add one more argument and one more line graph essay to be up to date like 'Etisalat' and 'Farm workers' by 23 May.

    The Fox

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